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Aaj se baras pehley..tum jo poochtey mujh se kon hoon main kesi hoon kis tarah ki larki hoon? muskura k main kehti..... tum se milney se pehley aam si main larki thi jab se tum ko dekha hai kuch tou farq aaya hai ayena naheen dekha pr ye jaanti hoon k ankhon main hai jb se tu ankhain pyaari lagti hain mujh p ho nazr teri khud p pyaar aaata hai jab bhi tu sarahta hai hans k maan leti hoon ek khaas larki hoon haan main maan leti hoon.......... tujh siwa mai sochoon kuch kab ye mujh ko fursat hai ghanton baatain kr k bhi ek aur pal ki hasrat hai........ main tmhari tum merey aur kia haqeqat hai............... kon kehta hai jaana ishq ek museebat hai ? . . . . sun sako tou ab sun lo aaj jo kahaani hai............... tum jis se pyaar kartay thay us dil ki ye zabaani hai haath jb se choota hai yaar jab se rootha hai muskuraati subho se shaam ban gayee hoon main ek khaas larki se aam ban gayi hooon main.......... bohot hi top class poem hai yeh .. very nice Somii fursat ke lamhaat main likha karo shairy .. bohot acha likhti ho :) aur khas tor pe jo finishing ki hai .. very nice .. aur yeh wala shair mujhe bohot acha laga .. tuj siwa mai sochoon kuch kab ye muj ko fursat hai ghanton baatain kar ke bhi aik aur pal ki hasrat hai

thank u dearssssssssssssss :P nuttoooo aisee be-aitbaar nazron se mat dekha kro... ;)) Noman bhai bzz lamhat main poety kon krta hai ..heheheh

Bohat Aala .... Shayeri kerti raho yar!! .. Ab hansna waqai mana he ... perhen aur darguzer keren: Har Gali Har Shehr Mohabbat Aazmaa li Har Gaam Pay Wafaon Ki Qehet Saali Kabhi Atkhelian Kabhi Waruftagiyan Kahin Udaas Perhen Mosaam Nay Ab kay Teri Har Adaa Apnaa li Ham Say Taghaful kay Kaee Tor Dushman say Wada e Khayr Sagaali Mana Andaaz e Bayan Haseen Tha Mager Alfaz Nay Lehjay Ki Taseer Uraa Li By Me :oops:

Har Gali Har Shehr Mohabbat Aazmaa li Har Gaam Pay Wafaon Ki Qehet Saali Kabhi Atkhelian Kabhi Waruftagiyan Kahin Udaas Perhen Mosaam Nay Ab kay Teri Har Adaa Apnaa li Ham Say Taghaful kay Kaee Tor Dushman say Wada e Khayr Sagaali Mana Andaaz e Bayan Haseen Tha Mager Alfaz Nay Lehjay Ki Taseer Uraa Li JJ ... bohot hi high quality ki shairy hai aap ki .. aur parh ke bilkul bhi aisa nahi lag raha ke yeh kisi nayi naweli shaira ki poem hai .. itne mushkil alfaz istamal kiye hain ke Allama Iqbal ki shairy yaad aa gyi ... bohot hi zayada touchy poem hai agar koi samajne wala ho to .. aise lag raha hai ke in 4 shairon main tum ne apni zindagi ki sari kahani suna di ho ..

Yeh is qadr tareef ... murwatan he na?? ..... Thanks a lot .. Faro n Noman

Wah wah wah wah Pehlii Saat lines nay dil moh liyaa JJ !! Great !! Aur bakii wali lines agarchaa achee hain par Kuch khaas maza nahi aya unkoo parh kar !! Agar hoo sakay to kuch aur sochain .

Thanks!! ... aik baar phir is ko likh kay sochungi aj

I mean pehlee walii sath lines thori gehraye rakhty hain , bohat acha plot hay . Pehla idea great hay !! par akhir main app nay khawateen digest kay writers ki tarah jab wo achanak sab kuch teek kar dete hain magic ki chari say app nay bi pecha churaya :P

Lolz ... ap waqai sahi keh rehe ho ... aik dam hi usko apni mot maar diya ,,, kuch aur lines hayn jo hayn achi mager is kay sath jor nahin paa reheen ,,,,, per main koshish ker rehi huun ,,,, dua kijiye ga :P

Hamaree Dua aur Ashirwaad app kay sath hay !! shukar hay yai idea bi sahe laga app ko .

:) Aik azaad nazm ..... Khadsha Tumhari Mohabbat Ka Suraj Doob Ker Meri Zeest Ko Viraan Na Ker Jae Keh Meri Rag e Jaan Main Jitni Tamazat Hay Yeh Isi Ki Badolat Hay Talatum Khayz Moj Furqat Ki Mere Saibaan Ko Masmaar Na Ker Jae Meri Saanson Main Ghulti Khamoshi Meri Ruh Main Uterta Sanata Mujhy Deemak Ki Terha Chaat Na Jae Main Anjanay Andeshon Main Mubtalah Larki! Shab e Firaaq Har Lamha Mere Dil Se Yeh Awaz Ati He Suno Larki! .... "Tumhari Mohabbat Ko Khatera Hai" By Nida (JJ) :oops: Aur Aik Ghazal ....... Ankhon Ko Jo Tabeer e Khawab Se Shanasai De Day Mere Maula Mujhy Aysi Koi Rahnumaai De Day Main Chahta Hun Aysi Kari Koi Azmaaish Sar e Aam Jo Khud apni Haar ki Gawahi De Day Ho Shamil Meri Zaat Bhi Mujahidon Main Malik! Mujhy Parastish e Nafs Say Rehai De Day Khuda Main Tujh Se Sirf Teri Raza Chahta Hun Kab Kehta Hun Mujhy Saari Khudai De Day? By Nida (JJ) :oops: Aur End pe aik sher: Yeh Keh Ker Mere Zameer Nay Mera Sath Chor Diya Mehngai Kay Is Dor Main Ab Baham Guzara Mushkil He!! By Nida (JJ) :oops: (Islaahi Tanqeed ka bharpoor istakbaal hoga!)

Aik azad nazm Mehruumi Main barish ki pehli bond ki terha Jism ki kori mitti main Usay samyt leta Meri zaat Uski zaat main ghul ker Mehakti! Mager ..... Aik baar Woh izhaar to kerta! Mere Honay ka Iqraar to Kerta! By Me :oops: pehli 7 lines waqyi bohot achi hain .. lekin jis tara aakhri 5 lines se finishing ki hai .. wo bohot hi kamal ki hai .. waqyi ek mehroomi si nazar aane lag jati hai .. :)

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