Get One Post To Fame Aslam_0_Alikum
Here goes Once Again
GET ONE POST TO FAME
All you guys have to do is
Post somthing special which you think can make you famous at Jandians. like
it can be poetry....(urdu, English ).
it can be Jokes....
it can be short stories but writer Name is must..( Urdu , English)
it can be sms....
it can be images as well
it can be Poetry Images as well
Each membr can post only once either poetry , jokes , short stories , sms , images
But not more thn one 1 post
Sabhii Members Participate karein is competition mein
RULES
Last date for Participation will be 27th july
One Member may not Participate with Multiple IDs
Once Posted can not be edited.
Points:Member ko 50 points milay ghay jo Participate karay gha and woh points Battle k Result mein count Hoon ghay
1st:500 Points
2nd:300
3rd:200
Good Luck To All of You
Lets Start the Battle 2 b Famous
$oni- 07-22-2008
Ye tum se keh diya kis ne
k tm bin reh nhi skta
ye dukh main seh nhi skta
Chalo main maan laita hun k tm bin main boht roya
Kayi raaton ko na soya
Mgr afsos hai jaanan k
ab k tm jo louto gy
Mujhe tabdeel pao gy
Bht mayous ho gy tum!!
Agr tum puchna chaho k aisa q kiya main ny
to sun lo ghor sy jaanan
Purani 1 riwaayat tang aa k tor di main ne
''MOHABBAT CHOR DI MENE!MOHABBAT CHOR DI MENE"
Prince Of Persia- 07-22-2008
this is my fav.
Mother's Dream
As I slept one night I saw this dream
Which further increased my vexation?
I dreamt I was going somewhere on the way
Dark it was and impossible to find the way
Trembling all over with fear I was
Difficult to take even a step with fear was
With some courage as I forward moved
I saw some boys as lined in nice array
Dressed in cmerald-like raiment they were
Carrying light lamps in there hands they were
They were going quietly behind each other
No one knew where they were to go
Involved in this thought was I
When in this troupe my son saw I
He was walking at the back, and was not walking fast
The lamp he had in his hands was not lighted
Recognizing him I said “O my dear”
Where have you come leaving me there?
Resells due to separation I am
Weeping every day for ever I am
You did not care even a little for me
What loyalty you showed, you left me”!
As the child saw the distress in me
He replied this, turning around to me
“The separation from me makes you cry
Not least little good does this to me”
He remained quiet for a while after talking
Showing me the lamp then he started talking
Do you understand what happened to this?
You tears have extinguished this”!
saThiyA- 07-23-2008
How Do I Love Thee?
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace.
I love thee to the level of everyday's
Most quiet need, by sun and candlelight.
I love thee freely, as men strive for Right;
I love thee purely, as they turn from Praise.
I love thee with a passion put to use
In my old griefs, and with my childhood's faith.
I love thee with a love I seemed to lose
With my lost saints, I love thee with the breath,
Smiles, tears, of all my life! and, if God choose,
I shall but love thee better after death...!!!
*xxJd's Nottyxx*- 07-23-2008
Yeh dolat bhi lay lo
Yeh shohrat bhi lay lo
Bhale chhin lo mujhase
Meri javaani
Magar mujhko lauta do
BACHPAN ka saavan
vo kaagaz kii kashti,
vo baarish kaa paani,
Muhalle ki sabse
nishaani puraani
vo budhiyaa jise bachche
kahte the naani
vo naani ki baaton mein
pariyon kaa deraa
vo chahre ki jhuriryon mein
sadiyon kaa pheraa
bhulaae nahin bhul sakataa hai koi
vo chhoti si raaten
vo lambi kahaani
kadi dhup mein
apne ghar se nikalna
vo chidiyaa
vo bulbul
vo titli pakadna
vo gudiya ki shaadi mein ladna jhagadna
vo jhuulon se girna
vo gir ke sambhalnaa
vo pital ke chhallon ke pyaare se tohafe
vo tuuti hui chudiyon ki nishaanikabhi ret ke unche tilon pe jaana
gharaunde banaanaa banaake mitaanaa
vo maasum chahat ki tasvir apni
vo khvaabon khilaunon ki jaagir apni
na duniyaa ka gham tha
na rishton ke bandhan
badi khubsurat thi
vo zindagani
yeh dolat bhi lay lo
yeh shohrat....
Rabi- 07-24-2008
Adil- 07-25-2008
woh khaloos tha ke khumar tha
woh janoon tha ke saraab tha
mujhey sochney mein zaman laga
mujhey munzilon ne bhoola diya
mujhey jis masiha pe maan tha
mujhey us ne sooli charha diya
kai humsafar kai rahguzr
mujhey rastey mein miley magar
meri tushnagi kuch aur hai
meri justajoo koi aur hai
woh jo roshni ki tarha barhey
magar ansuon mei sama sakey
jo subha ki pehli kiran bane
mere dil ka aangan nikhaar de
jo muhabbaton ki ravaytein
laho ki bali se sanwaar de
mujhey us wafa ki talaash hai
mujhey us wafaki talaash hai
magar is jahan-e-kharab mein
yahan khahishon ke saraab mei
mujhey kaun de aisy wafa
mein kahan se laoon woh wafa
inhi uljhanon mein ghira hua
yehi sochta mein chala gya
Noman- 07-27-2008
Haya- 07-27-2008
Jo Kahin Na Mile Wo Khushi Chahiye
Dard Kaisa B Ho Bandagi Chahiye
Mujhko Duniya Ki Ab Koi Khuwahish Nhi
Aakhrat Ki Mujhe Zindagi Chahiye
Tere He Aage Haath Phelaon
Ab Aesi ALLAH Mujhe Bebasi Chahiye
Tu Ho Jaye Raazi Sanwar Jaun Main
Mere Malik Aagahi Chahiye
Main Jhukun Or Jhukun Bus Jhuka He Rahun
Ibbadat Me Bus Ye Aajizi Chahiye
Main Bhatak Jaun To Aasra Dey Mujhe
Aesi ALLAH Mujhe Rehbari Chahiye..
MD- 07-28-2008
Noman- 07-29-2008
very nice posts .. thanks u all jis jis ne participate kiya ..
MD aap ki post late hai, is lie wo count nahi hui .. sorry
3 Judges ke result ko mila ke Final Result kuch is tara raha ..1st: Noman
2nd: Jd's Notty
3rd: Prince of Persia
Mubarak ho aap teenon ko .. aur baki sab ko ..
sab ki posts bohot achi theen .. Thanks once again ..
Points
Perfect Green: 700 Points
Perfect Red: 650 Points
Perfect Blue: 50 Points
P@R!- 07-29-2008
congratzzzzzz :)
$oni- 07-30-2008
Congratz green n red :P
*xxJd's Nottyxx*- 07-30-2008
Thx pari and soni
and congrats 2 the other winners
Adil- 07-30-2008
congratz winners.........
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